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whispers upon the wind
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 11:06:28 PM in AEST
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there on a rock she sat contemplating
deep, deep far into the deepest forest,
thundering hooves sounding on distant
hills, as warriors raged on in unrest,
told to hide there until they returned
to hush and nay not even whisper upon the wind,
earthy etheral scents wafted up to her
she bethought of this long way traveled,
these vivid dreams of longing she held,
now their village moved northwardly
this new world so beautiful yet deadly,
sunrises that looked like the morning in his eyes,
trees held whispered echos of chain mail
will the men return or endungeoned be?
knights and horses clad in heavy armour
lady faire wonders what of her will be,
is he safe? oh where, the one she adores?
branch breaks; horse snorts; she loves him to her core,
later on that rock they held one another
deep forest deep; tightly each to the other,
cantering hooves sounding on claimed land
all warriors dismounting; hers in his hand,
victory! new homes to be built; kisses sweet
a hush; whispers upon the wind in bliss; when lips meet.
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Re: whispers upon the wind
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 11:11:32 PM AEST
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What a captivating tale of love....you painted such a vivid picture, like an artist upon a canvas. Heartwarming and leaves me in the midst of a long...sighhhhhh.
Roses at your feet
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by arden on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 11:11:38 PM AEST
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what a beautiful write. loved this. well written and just amazing. well done.
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Re: whispers upon the wind
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 11:12:22 PM AEST
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Ah, the conquering heroes return, her knight amongst them. What a beautiful tale of faith and enduring love. The maiden waits for her beloved. This is a great tale. Throughly enjoyable.
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Re: whispers upon the wind
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by blueheart on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 11:17:37 PM AEST
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| You've outdone yourself again Nessa. Great piece of poetry here. |
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Re: whispers upon the wind
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 11:32:22 PM AEST
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Aww this is beautiful hun, well written and such sweet words...
Love 'n Hugs
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Re: whispers upon the wind
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by emystar on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 11:52:12 PM AEST
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I agree, very good write.
luv, huggs,
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Re: whispers upon the wind
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by ShadowDaughter on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 11:57:58 PM AEST
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Awww, Nessa, this is (like all of your poetry) beautiful . . . what a sweet story. Made me smile :).
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Re: whispers upon the wind
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by Whisper on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 12:37:36 AM AEST
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Thats beauty and that is just the way I dream it happens. Lovely write.
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Re: whispers upon the wind
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 02:16:34 AM AEST
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Ahhh..Our hero does us proud once more!!!! Ness this is so very well written.... This is now one of my favs of yours.....
Hugs
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Re: whispers upon the wind
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by forever_lonely on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 06:56:52 AM AEST
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What a fantasy, nessa this was written magically, i loved it from start to finish, this really made me drift off into my own fantasy world of dragons and knights, demons and wizards, love and romance,
Captivatingly perfect
Luke
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Re: whispers upon the wind
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 07:02:25 AM AEST
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| Awww..fantastic romance..ended in a sweet kiss..Ooh...love and hugs my dear friend.:o). venkat |
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Re: whispers upon the wind
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 09:30:53 AM AEST
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a lovely tale magically romantic
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Re: whispers upon the wind
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by Merry on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 01:59:24 PM AEST
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what a beautiful tlae as only you could tell it - truly a fairytale with a happy ending
hugs
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Re: whispers upon the wind
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 03:15:44 PM AEST
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knights in armour always give for a romantic scene, you wrote this beautifully.
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Re: whispers upon the wind
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by The_Phantom on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 03:32:13 PM AEST
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The beauty within this poem I can't decibe, moving and heartfelt, poetry in motion.
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Re: whispers upon the wind
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 04:34:27 PM AEST
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took my breath away
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Re: whispers upon the wind
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by afraid_of_fear on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 05:02:45 PM AEST
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this is so sweet.. a happy ending.. aww.. beautiful..
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Re: whispers upon the wind
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by silent on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 05:35:25 PM AEST
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Beautiful tale, and oh so true. You have the ability to capture the reader deeply into the moment, and this is no exception.
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Re: whispers upon the wind
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by Cynthia on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 10:18:37 PM AEST
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| Nessa, what a beautifully written piece. I enjoyed it. Great job my friend. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: whispers upon the wind
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 10:53:12 PM AEST
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reminds me of all the times in my lifetime when i had to wait for whatever reason for my You caught the moment just right Nessa.
With that first kiss.....all the months of waiting disappear into bliss.
Montie is letting me use his laptap so I can stay in bed
Enjoyable write Nessa'
love you'
Hope your father is better
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Re: whispers upon the wind
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 10:56:21 PM AEST
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If it were possible to be transported into a fairytale and slip beneath a ladys skin, I have experienced it.
I saw everything you described in my mind.
I am your forever fan and I BEG for more.
You wouldn't want to see a grown woman beg would ya?
*Begs shamelessly for more*
How about puppy dog eyes?
Can't wait till the next one...
Kie |
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Re: whispers upon the wind
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by JennyFruFru on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 01:23:28 PM AEST
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| this is so beautiful and innocent... a princess and her prince charming :) |
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Re: whispers upon the wind
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 03:41:40 PM AEST
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Wow, nessa... that was magical and mystical. a true poem from the heart of someone who loves to love. great write.
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Re: whispers upon the wind
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by twinkletoes on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 11:28:20 PM AEST
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another of your dream like writes, i always enjoy this style you so beautifully display. the previous poem to this also has a little of the old world charm this shows.
lovely to read.
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Re: whispers upon the wind
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by secretwind on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 01:07:47 AM AEST
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| beautiful...your wind flows gently and vividly... |
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