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*Where Am I Going In Life?*
Contributed by
Val
on
Thursday, 26th September 2002 @ 09:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Where am I going in life?
What is my purpose?
I only screw up,
And get punished for it.
What is there to look forward to?
Will it be an adventure?
Am I trying too hard?
Or trying too little?
I am always messing up,
I try so hard to accomplish my dreams.
Is it worth all this effort?
Is it going to be worth it in the end?
Some days I never want to end,
But then I want some to be over so quick.
I cannot keep living in this past,
I have to take risks.
I have to live my life to the fullest,
But I don’t know.
I might not be around the next day.
Should I just enjoy everyday…
As if it was my last?
Copyright ©
Val
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2002-09-26 09:20:00]
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Re: *Where Am I Going In Life?*
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Thursday, 26th September 2002 @ 09:49:08 AM AEST
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Hi Val,
Ummm Yes you should to the last one!
I think maybe the writing could be where you're going or maybe the football, sorry soccer! What position do you play?
You may enjoy a couple of my writes 'Ryan Giggs' and 'Them!' or you may not!
Excellent writing
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: *Where Am I Going In Life?*
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by Val on
Tuesday, 15th October 2002 @ 12:32:00 PM AEST
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Hey Dean,
Thanks for commenting on my poem! Sorry I am replying so late but I have been so busy. It's nice to know people read them and enjoy them. Yeah, do you play soccer? What position? I play defense: sweeper or stopper. I'll be on a look out for some of your poems. Maybe if you could, possibly email some to me lzuro@msn.com. Thanks! ~Val~ |
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