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In Your Shadows
Contributed by
blueheart
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Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 10:38:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Remove me,
From the essence of my sorrow,
These impulsive jerks of emotion I fall to.
I am collapsing,
Another star detaches itself,
From the heavenly glitter above.
Pelt me, pelt me all you want,
With subtle hints and the intimidation you pose,
And watch as my pulse grows weaker.
In your life,
Everything falls into place,
The peal of applause when people see your face.
You've never succumbed to the seething pain I bear,
You never saw yourself hidden from the limelight,
You've always had that chance to glow,
And I've always been watching in your shadows.
Copyright ©
blueheart
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2004-04-12 22:38:16]
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Re: In Your Shadows
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by twinkletoes on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 11:04:16 PM AEST
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go get 'em! my thoughts exactly also!
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Re: In Your Shadows
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 11:28:45 PM AEST
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This is so full of bitterness.....You should never be in anyones shadows my friend. I believe in you ;o)
Roses
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Re: In Your Shadows
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by emystar on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 11:41:45 PM AEST
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Very interesting, unique write.
No one is perfect and never be while on this planet.
Good work.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: In Your Shadows
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 11:43:14 PM AEST
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| this is brilliant, i think everyone who reads this poem can identify, for me it reminds me of my sister in law, always everything handed to her, and never struggled, great write:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: In Your Shadows
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 12:01:43 AM AEST
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We all have our own individual strengths and weaknesses. Never allow yourself to feel inferior to anyone or walk in anothers shadow. No matter where you go or what you do there is always going to be someone you think can achieve goal better than you. That is because we are our own worst enemys when it comes to judging ourselve. Stand tall and stand strong. Admire anothers strengths but never doubt your own abilities.
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Re: In Your Shadows
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by AspenGlow on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 01:21:38 AM AEST
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| Break our from those shadows and stand in your own Light, your words are your light and it is a Nova. Beautiful write, as are all of your verses. You are a Nova. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: In Your Shadows
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 05:53:34 AM AEST
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uh..sadly, I don't have any of those great inspirational quotes that are meant to feel better, but I just want to say I totally agree with you.
It's just damn unfair how everything gets handed down to them while others have to strugle through thorns...
lol ok thats enough...
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Re: In Your Shadows
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 04:39:48 PM AEST
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| ohhhhhhhhhh this gives me chills so haunting I know this well!! Dont worry about the ones now who are hurting you for one day it comes comes tumbling down sad but true. Your just as good as anyone else and dont let anyone tell you otherwise. Keep shining your light is much brighter!michelle |
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Re: In Your Shadows
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by Avarice_Riot on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 06:11:28 AM AEST
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| Ohh I really, really loved this, probably my favorite poem by you so far. I know this is easy to say but "Nobody can make you feel inferior without your consent." - Eleanor Roosevelt. I used to feel the way you do a lot but I'm learning not to let other people's talents and abilities shadow over me. We're all special, and that's not b.s. ;) |
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Re: In Your Shadows
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 07:00:11 AM AEST
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It is hard being a shadow when another glows in the limelight. The last stanza really touched my heart.
You write extraordinarily well.
Kie |
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Re: In Your Shadows
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 11:05:32 AM AEST
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| i hate people who think they are perfect. no-one is perfect. i despise them, great write, i would say perfect..but...lo. brilliant. *hugs* phil xxx |
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Re: In Your Shadows
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 02:01:45 AM AEST
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This is quite special to me i was always criticized as a child and always thought everyone was better than me, until i grew up and realized it was my taunters who had the problem, Excellent.
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