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Loser Who Loves
Contributed by
nail-to-the-head
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Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 07:56:13 PM in AEST
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I'm no good at writting poems,
yet I feel the need to write,
to tell you how I feel for you,
and I want you by my side,
I will not stop writting,
untill my feelings are all out,
untill you know just how I feel,
you're the one I can't live without,
from the first time that I saw you,
untill the present day,
I new that I would love you,
no matter what others may say,
you may have been a loser
to people at your skool,
but I AM a loser
im fat and ugly and totally un-cool,
but im proud of who I am,
and I know that you are too,
I know I am loser,
but a loser who loves you.
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Re: Loser Who Loves
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by New_York_Chick on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 08:17:17 PM AEST
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i can see your confidence even though it might have not always been easy to be that way
loved the poem |
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Re: Loser Who Loves
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by blueheart on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 10:55:33 PM AEST
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| Dont beat yourself up like that. A very honest write here. |
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Re: Loser Who Loves
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 04:02:16 PM AEST
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Spell 'writting' with only one 't'. Anyway, pedantry aside, I quite liked this, as It ended quite eloquently, with a kick.
Keep writting. ;o) |
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Re: Loser Who Loves
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by Juliet on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 07:38:21 PM AEST
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| It may have been written quickly, but I like it. I think that the rhyme takes away some of the quality, though, but that's just my opinion. |
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