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A Wish
Contributed by
New_York_Chick
on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 07:24:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Wish I could be part of your world
Wish I had you to be held and to hold
But I wasted all my chances
To tell what had to be told
And now I'm lost
I would've given it all
To be in your heart
Wish you were there to break my fall
And a small part
Of me is still waiting
The tears for you
Never left my eyes
And I was proud
But what's the use
I wish you had no doubt
I'm enough for you
Nothing seems to
Take your place in my mind
Wish I could find
Something else
To sooth the pain
That's coming onto me
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New_York_Chick
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2004-04-12 19:24:22]
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Re: A Wish
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 07:55:55 PM AEST
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| so sad......... well written:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: A Wish
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by Kie on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 06:07:52 PM AEST
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So sad. I have been there and it eats at you inside and occupies your mind and like you said "Wish I could find
Something else
To sooth the pain
That's coming onto me"
As weird as this sounds all you can do is let time do its work.
Heart touching poem.
Kie
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Re: A Wish
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by forgottensorrow on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 08:58:42 PM AEST
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very sad...ive been through times like these and it always hurts
.:.Chrissy.:. |
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