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Bloody Mary
Contributed by
TwEeK
on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 06:56:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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Mary had a little lamb,
Fleece as white as snow,
Mary's turn to slaughter,
Butchers knife with chopping block,
Cry to your mother little lamb,
Menacing laughter echos,
Poor little defencless creature,
Blood splattered apron,
Chopping and diceing to perfection,
Blood and guts spill over the floor,
Hair tied back away from the mess,
Wool damp and dyeing red,
Cackeling with cruelness,
Stupid blind sheep,
I know I'm evil but what can i say?
These sheep are sp easy to torture,
Mary had a little lamb,
Fleece as white as snow.
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TwEeK
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2004-04-12 18:56:12]
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Re: Bloody Mary
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by arden on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 07:46:34 PM AEST
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i think this was awesome. really gruesome. nice job. i liked it very much.
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Re: Bloody Mary
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 03:43:22 PM AEST
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| HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!! Loved the poem!!!! Hehehehe... DIE LITTLE BASTARDS!!!!!!! DIE DIE DIE!!!!!! BLEED TILL THERE'S NOTHING LEFT TO BLEED!!!!! MUAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Re: Bloody Mary
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by corrupted_minds on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 02:27:25 AM AEST
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TwEeK i have read some of your poetry and i have to say that it is really good, way better than anything i could write. This was a very interesting and good peace. Nice work.
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