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Temptation
Contributed by
putteragain
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Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 06:20:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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reminesent of yesteryear nostalgia overflowing
memories to the surface i try to subdue
knowing
relapse on the edge of reality dare i resist
growing
sweat pours from every pour faint scent
blowing
bliss is my life now then
destroying
this concoction in pill form my future
toying
grasping my tools of humanity
employing
Copyright ©
putteragain
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2004-04-12 18:20:26]
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Re: Temptation
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by Kie on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 06:31:42 PM AEST
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It speaks of characteristics pertaining to addiction. The demon flares.
I could be wrong but thats my guess.
Enjoyed this one...
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Re: Temptation
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by Whisper on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 12:42:35 AM AEST
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nice
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Re: Temptation
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by Hoots on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 05:57:42 PM AEST
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I'm guessing you are addicted to some kind of pill. And you want to go back to when you weren't? Great poem. It kept me thinking.
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Re: Temptation
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 03:33:28 PM AEST
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I can relate. My drug of choice may be a little different, but I know the feeling well. "Resist the devil and he will flee from you." I just keep repeating that. You describe this well. Very well.
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Re: Temptation
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by Twisterchaser on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 02:43:56 PM AEST
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The temptation of this life are often overwelming, most with the same end result. For ever temptatiom there is a way to escape, for we will not be tempted more than we can stand.
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