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removed the blades
Contributed by
valek
on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 06:01:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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my life constantly blinds me
as if angels stabbing my eyes
causing every single image i see
to be nothing but hatred and lies
yet you have removed the blades so i can see life clearly
i have never had an emotion to feel for someone so dearly
but i cant tell you while i feel to stay in my tiny hole
for how will you react to the sudden opening of my soul
the thought of your kiss brings such a happiness to my heart
while the notion of never seeing you again tears me apart
knowing my thoughts on life have changed since i met you
i have to tell you everything, im just scared of what you might do
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valek
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2004-04-12 18:01:37]
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Re: removed the blades
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by skinsfan on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 12:02:08 AM AEST
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| Nice smooth write-skinsfan. |
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Re: removed the blades
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 10:19:58 PM AEST
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| excelente |
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Re: removed the blades
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by Sweetpoptartz07 on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 12:29:49 PM AEST
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| OMGG!!! this Write is so GOODD!!! i have been there n to this day i still havent saidnethint which i think it might be the time for me to do!!!:-) Good write!:)Good LucK! |
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