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A thru Z
Contributed by
chris3btine77
on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 04:22:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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After love, what is left?
Be your best; put you to the test
Challenge yourself
Define yourself
Express yourself
Forget your fears
Grip those tears
Hold on to whats dear
Initiate new love
Join a club
Keep your freinds
Love them till the end
Mind the good times
Nevermind the bad
Open your heart
Pump it full of happiness
Quest for new love
Remember your plan
Someone is out there
They are scared too
U must find them
Victory is you
Wait for the sign
Xcellent choice
You found the one
Zero confusion; happiness done
Copyright ©
chris3btine77
... [
2004-04-12 16:22:29]
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Re: A thru Z
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by sheri on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 04:25:34 PM AEST
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| Very nice write. Bravo. |
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Re: A thru Z
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by damned on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 04:33:03 PM AEST
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| its ok..thou..not my type...too hopeish..and loveish too...anyway..its ok...not my thing thou |
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Re: A thru Z
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by face-in-the-crowd on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 04:53:40 PM AEST
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Nice write!
Open your heart
Pump it full of happiness........
HOW TRUE!!! |
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Re: A thru Z
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by New_York_Chick on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 07:55:36 PM AEST
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made me smile
Xcellent work =] |
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Re: A thru Z
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by Butterat_Zool on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 05:06:51 PM AEST
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| A really cool poem and a neat idea. You may want to consider your use of rhyme in this poem. Having some rhyming pairs of lines throughout the poem while some don't rhyme make the rhythm and beat of the poem a little awkward. Try either accentuating the rhyme by having it consistent throughout the poem or just taking it out as much as possible. That'll make your already wonderful poem a lot easier to read. Butterat Zool. |
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