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A Better Day To Die
Contributed by
Queen_Dolly
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Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 03:07:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
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A thousand dreams
A thousand lies
Nightmares haunting
Moonlit skies
Devoured soul
An open heart
You leave no choice
For we must part
Dance your ballet
Your Russian roulette
Sing your songs of sorrow
Keep praying for tomorrow
A better day to die.
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Queen_Dolly
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Re: A Better Day To Die
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by reilt on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 03:15:07 PM AEST
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excellent stuff..really really liked this one...it's so raw and powerful in its emotions and i love the lines
Dance your ballet
Your Russian roulette
Sing your songs of sorrow
Keep praying for tomorrow
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Re: A Better Day To Die
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by mountainhigh on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 03:43:27 PM AEST
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| A great farewell poem, short and sweet and to the point. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: A Better Day To Die
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by Kazzy1231 on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 11:48:08 AM AEST
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| Good poem! |
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Re: A Better Day To Die
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by JKRoser on
Tuesday, 5th May 2009 @ 07:13:20 PM AEST
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Thank you so much for this poem. It's really so raw and beautiful. It's wonderful.
Jennifer :) |
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