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Reality
Contributed by
deepdarkthinker
on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 03:06:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Your sweating
You can't breath
Your thirsty
Your freaking out
You can't see straight
You pass out on the floor
Nobody see's you are cares about you
Your in the hospitial
Needles poking you everywhere
Your mom screaming "save her"
The doctor trying to revive you
You wake up
Your so tired
You ask your mom what happened
She says you took "X"
You almost didn't wake up
She asks why you did it
You say I didn't think it would do anything
You were wrong
That's the reality of drugs.
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2004-04-12 15:06:48]
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Re: Reality
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by reilt on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 03:09:10 PM AEST
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| wow...really poerful..i hope whoever you wrote this to will wake up to the reality and help themselves |
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Re: Reality
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 03:11:18 PM AEST
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A real powerful write, very straight forward.
Well done. |
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Re: Reality
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by Alina on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 01:51:35 PM AEST
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| i respect everyone one who writes poetry. Some people may like some poems while others don't. But personally, I feel as if this is an exaggeration by someone who has never experienced this themselves. X is not like how this poem reflects it. It is a complete different level. |
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