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Gates of Heaven
Contributed by
reilt
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Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 03:03:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
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They say the gates of Heaven
Open at seven.
Well, tell them
I'll be there at quarter to so
With my pillow and sleeping bag
In tow.
Just in case
There's any chance
Of early admission
For good behaviour
And/Or condition!
Copyright ©
reilt
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2004-04-12 15:03:49]
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Re: Gates of Heaven
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 03:08:12 PM AEST
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| This is sweet. a fine write. |
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Re: Gates of Heaven
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by Queen_Dolly on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 03:18:52 PM AEST
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That's sweet and full of hope and optimism =)
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Re: Gates of Heaven
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by SugimotoYouki on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 09:09:24 AM AEST
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*laughs gently*
this is so childishly innocent..
it's sweetness refreshes my heart... |
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