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Blazing Fires.
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 03:03:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Deep, as i plunge to the ground.
I screech, without making a sound.
My feet, feel so swollen and round.
As i drop, the burning heat, is all around...
I feel, so unreal, in this world of pain.
Everything is wrong, but its still the same.
A grain...
Of blood, drips down, from my brain.
Then, my blood, begins to rain.
And drop, by drop, i go insane!
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deathdrop
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2004-04-12 15:03:41]
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Re: Blazing Fires.
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by Thumper0719 on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 04:51:25 PM AEST
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Thats really good. Your sister really should make an account!
*Britty* |
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Re: Blazing Fires.
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by reprobate on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 07:57:32 PM AEST
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| It's okay. It does need some polish. No offense intended. |
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Re: Blazing Fires.
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by Soulless on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 07:02:59 PM AEST
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Very creative and interesting consept. I like it, I agree that your sister should really get an account.
Kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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