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Nobody to Hold You
Contributed by
merry
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Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 02:49:14 PM in AEST
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Literally nobody to hold
Air and nothing more
Filling lungs with heated dreams
Lusting for the blue sparkling diamonds
Your eyes not so arrogant as unsure
Words led me to think something else
Capped the overflowing fountain
Whispering your name again and again
Until I lost my train of thought
Destroying the yellow sunlight
Turning it to faded twilight
Dashing hopes we have
Of holding hands in the afternoon
How could I be so unwise
To kiss you like that, and not realize
Your standards are the same as mine
Ingredients we crave are there
In varying amounts we hoard
What we look for in each other’s eyes
Acceptance is it not?
Well past beautiful we have turned
Yet attraction blossoms like a rose
Fragrant and seductive bud
Tantalizing mystery of love
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merry
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Re: Nobody to Hold You
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by reilt on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 02:54:48 PM AEST
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| i really loved this one...thank you for posting it...you're soooo talented |
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Re: Nobody to Hold You
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by Kie on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 03:03:14 PM AEST
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Love is all of those things you described. It is painful when the realization comes that you are hugging only space that can't be held within loving arms.
Very deep, thought provoking poem.
Enjoyed it immensely.
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Re: Nobody to Hold You
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 03:03:48 PM AEST
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| this is very beautiful. great write. *hugs* phil xxx |
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Re: Nobody to Hold You
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 09:40:46 PM AEST
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ahhh love, sweet love, this just captivated me, with memories lol, ahh well, they were good ones, seems no matter where we are or how we meet, or how far apart, those heartstrings still tug:) this is really sweet, i love it, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Nobody to Hold You
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by Whisper on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 01:28:15 AM AEST
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Nice
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Re: Nobody to Hold You
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 03:21:49 PM AEST
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You never disappoint, Merry. The balance of relationship expressed so well in this one.
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Re: Nobody to Hold You
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 04:27:10 PM AEST
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My God woman...this is incredible. You are so in my head sometimes, but no wonder ( twins)
Well past beautiful we have turned
Yet attraction blossoms like a rose
Fragrant and seductive bud
Tantalizing mystery of love
awestruck
Roses at your feet again
Larry
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