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optique blind
Contributed by
valek
on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 11:06:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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the light flickers on, the light shimmers off
a fluctuation of your souls cough
cant control as much as you thought
question if its true what you taught
will your armageddon insue?
if your heart isnt real than nothing is true
you blink and the death is gone
look up and the rain is a pawn
going for your queen
or is it the king?
your young but your mind isnt teen
what is the praises you sing?
will your armageddon insue?
i dont believe its true
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valek
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2004-04-12 11:06:15]
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Re: optique blind
(User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 12:09:34 PM AEST
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| this is cool, the rythem is simply awsome |
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Re: optique blind
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by Kie on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 06:58:24 PM AEST
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I really liked the rhythm of this piece. It was fast moving and a very nice poem.
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