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Humanacide
Contributed by
alecfernadez
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Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 10:06:22 AM in AEST
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I wander into the light of day,
Such beauty yet so much evil,
In awe I have nothing to say,
It dumbfounds me,
Confuses me,
Makes me wanna cry,
That a world so beautiful,
Has so many people
Just waiting to die
Sometimes I wish we could die,
Save this dying world,
Re-cleanse the scorched skies
So destroy every belief you held,
We are not superior,
We are slaves to nature,
We are simply inferior
Its such a pity we are a virus,
Ripping apart the world we know,
With such unrelenting violence,
But we forget we reap what we soe,
And the end is inevtiable
Our doomed race wil go
Maybe one day with luck,
We will be obliterated,
Crushed and erradicated,
The world clensed from fleshy muck,
And maybe tree's can grow again,
Mother earth can live without pain
We are not the unique snow flake,
We believe to be,
All we are is dead, doomed and fake,
Filled with greed,
But what comes around,
Comes around trice,
And without a sound,
Man will become mice,
And we will leave this plane,
And make everything right again
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alecfernadez
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2004-04-12 10:06:22]
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Re: Humanacide
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by Avarice_Riot on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 10:13:15 AM AEST
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| I hear you. Stellar and thought-provoking write. |
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Re: Humanacide
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by spider on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 10:28:10 AM AEST
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| completley agree. gud poem. nice flow and layout |
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Re: Humanacide
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by GeorgeJamesDelgado on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 11:04:06 AM AEST
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| Your poem about the world's situation is well expressed. You are not afraid to tell it as it is. |
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Re: Humanacide
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by alecfernadez on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 11:50:27 AM AEST
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the line, Just wanting to die
should be 'Just waiting to die' |
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Re: Humanacide
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by LouisaMontagu on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 05:36:20 PM AEST
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well done, yet another excellent write xx
Luv Louisa xx |
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Re: Humanacide
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by LouisaMontagu on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 05:36:45 PM AEST
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well done, yet another excellent write xx
Luv Louisa xx |
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Re: Humanacide
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by arden on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 10:07:53 AM AEST
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whoa powerful. i loved this, just so well written and the flow was amazing. a very awesome poem! keep it up because you have a great talent.
Arden |
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