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real
Contributed by
Insomnia_InfiniteSadness
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Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 08:59:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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As I stumble blindly through my world, I find something real
Its touch so warm and pleasant, its presence comforting
But time passes and I must leave it
Now embedded in my heart it tears away
In agony and misery I lie silently
Cold again, I slowly start to move again
Blindly searching for something real
Every now and then I will see it and run for it, only to loose it again
Come back to me again, so real.
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Re: real
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by spider on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 09:10:27 AM AEST
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| so sad, expecially the line before the last, bears so true to reality |
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Re: real
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by Avarice_Riot on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 09:13:13 AM AEST
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| Brilliant write! I'm sure a lot of people can relate to this, I definitely can. |
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Re: real
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by Broken_Skin on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 09:53:59 AM AEST
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| wow this is amazing, so short, but it kicks the ass of some really long ones ive read lol, painfully awesom... x x x |
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