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Abused.
Contributed by
Thivanka
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Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 02:40:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Abused.
Don’t hurt me I’m fragile,
Just like a dirty old tile,
Stomped and stumped,
Not loved.
Why did you push me?
Did you not see?
A lonely child meant to be loved,
Not shoved.
I went through all hell and pain,
Fought a battle in vain,
Still you kept me chained,
Not loved.
-Thivanka.
Copyright ©
Thivanka
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2004-04-12 02:40:47]
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Re: Abused.
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by TheSpiritx on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 02:49:15 AM AEST
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Good poem. It feels like it ended a little abruptly, but it gets the point across in any case. I would suggest maybe going over this in the future to add on more.
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Re: Abused.
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by emystar on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 03:14:59 AM AEST
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Very sad but written well.
Very strong write!
luv, huggs, hope,
emy |
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Re: Abused.
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by deathdrop on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 07:31:00 AM AEST
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| powerfully emotional! good. i like it. |
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