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~The Rocking Chair~
Contributed by
Cynthia
on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 10:53:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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A little girl
sits in front of
her bedroom window,
she silently sits
in her rocking chair.
The night breeze
blows through the open window,
the curtains sway
back and forth
in the wind.
The rocking chair creaks
from the back and forth motion,
the little girl's heart
is saddened by the
loss of her parents.
She silently sits
in the rocking chair
to help ease her pain,
it reminds her of
being rocked in
her mother's arms
every night before bed.
The little girl
sits in front of
her bedroom window,
she sits silently
in her rocking chair,
as the tears gently
roll down her
rosy red cheeks.
Copyright Cynthia Jones
Apr.11/2004
Copyright ©
Cynthia
... [
2004-04-11 22:53:47]
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Re: ~The Rocking Chair~
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by morelikelyrics on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 10:55:57 PM AEST
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Oh now I want my mommy...(not really)
But this was so moving... and beautiful!!
Just lovely cynthia, you have great talent...
Keep writing!!!
~Morelikelyrics |
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Re: ~The Rocking Chair~
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by Rylo on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 11:12:49 PM AEST
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| This was a really great poem. I loved it keep them coming. |
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Re: ~The Rocking Chair~
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 11:44:17 PM AEST
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| sadly beautiful vivid images:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: ~The Rocking Chair~
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 12:56:21 AM AEST
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Well, as tears are now rolling down my cheeks as this reminds me of when my beloved grandfather died when I was six, I must say to you that this is an emotion filled piece of work. Your imaging was perfect and it definitely pulled me in. You are just getting better and better, my dear.
hugs,
Rita |
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Re: ~The Rocking Chair~
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by loveisendless on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 01:03:34 AM AEST
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SO SAD! BUT YOU WROTE IT SO NICE!!
LOL-DAN!!! |
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Re: ~The Rocking Chair~
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by emystar on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 01:41:33 AM AEST
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I agree very sad but u wrote it so well that I can see her tears.
Luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: ~The Rocking Chair~
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by arden on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 03:58:39 PM AEST
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this was sad :(
really well written, just stunning. loved this.
Arden |
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