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Nothing Special
Contributed by
forever_lonely
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Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 10:10:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
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We hold a special bond, me and you
Something that cant be broken
Though winds have changed
Although fires have flickered
Were still so close, you and I
The best friend a guy could ask for
Always there if I need you
Acting like we just dont care
To joke, to laugh these simple pleasures
We indulge in for hours, you and I
I watched you tonight, beaming, like you do
So many people ive never met, strangers
But as i watched, I noticed something cold
Something hurt that could not be healed
We dont act so different to them, you and I
I realised it wasnt just me you were like that with
Its how you are, with everyone
It hurt so much to believe, but i guess its true
Im nothing special, in anyway, at all
Our friendship is so unique, just like all your others
You dont even know you do it
Its not your fault, our friendships, nothing different
I guess its me, it has to be
That must be why, were nothing special, you and I
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Re: Nothing Special
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 10:21:17 PM AEST
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| sounds pretty special to me, each person we are friends with is unique and dear, this poem made me think a lot, well written:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Nothing Special
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 10:26:28 PM AEST
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Not Good?!?!?!! LUKE! This was better then Good this was GREAT! Wow, I had to choke back tears....cause I know exactly what you are talking about and it's something I've been fighting for the past couple days. Thank you for sharing. This was perfect.
Lindsey |
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Re: Nothing Special
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by morelikelyrics on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 10:29:53 PM AEST
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dont underestimate your writing...
many people struggle to even find words to describe their emotions and thoughts...
And to depict them so well, as you have done, shows talent and potential...
I have enjoyed this write, and am quite moved by your emotive prose...
...all the girls in every girly magazine cant make me feel any less alone... |
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Re: Nothing Special
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 10:50:02 PM AEST
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| like some1 said, its gotta be sumin specail man, otherwise u wudnt feel hurt. great poem tho, captured the idea |
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Re: Nothing Special
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 07:00:35 AM AEST
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I agree with the others.....it has to be something special.... good write..
Jenni |
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Re: Nothing Special
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by blueheart on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 07:15:03 AM AEST
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| You and I obviously dont have the same definition of good because this was amazing. :) |
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Re: Nothing Special
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by mountainhigh on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 10:22:06 AM AEST
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| One in the croud, but you're wrong in that, you stand out unique above all. The words show that. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Nothing Special
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by afraid_of_fear on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 05:34:15 PM AEST
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this is so sad.. i know what that feeling's like though.. and god doesn't it hurt..
great poem, i loved it..
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: Nothing Special
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by Kie on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 07:03:46 PM AEST
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So many slow songs flitted thru my mind as I was reading your poem. You know what? The really special attributes in a person don't seem special to that person but to the viewer they are exquisite. Remind yourself daily of how special you are. Oh and chant three times in the mirror just for me "I am a great poet, I am a great poet, I am a great poet"
Because you are...
Kie |
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Re: Nothing Special
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by fallen_eyes on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 05:48:19 PM AEST
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luke all friends a special. acting the same with everyone is all an illusion there will always be individual things that makes the friendship u share with them special. I mean look at our friendship i can joke around with bout u and john easily but if i need to cry ill come to u first. Its not that there is no trust between me and john he is someone i can always tlk to also but its the bond we have that makes it special even if i dont always show it. so whoever this poem is about maybe they dont show that bond either, but it doesnt mean they dont feel it.
luv ya T xxxxxxxx |
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