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You Did This
Contributed by
CuttersAngel
on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 09:44:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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The issue is gone, things should be fine
But I still don't feel like you're only mine
I still feel hurt, you still don't care
So I swallow these pills to make things fair
With thinning blood I slice my veins
Knowing nothing could be the same
I feel you don't care, that it's not me you love
And maybe I tried too hard, or maybe not enough
Why can't you see the pain I still feel
Why can't our love again be real
This shouldn't have happened, why again me
It doesn't matter now, my blood flows free
I should've been better, medication might of helped
But I didn't have your support and it couldn't cure the pain I felt.
Copyright ©
CuttersAngel
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2004-04-11 21:44:12]
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Re: You Did This
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by LiquidChaos on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 09:51:53 PM AEST
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this sounds exactly like something i would have written two months ago when i pretty much did what this poem describes. a very realistic picture. great write. keep it up!
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Re: You Did This
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by sheri on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 09:52:10 PM AEST
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| Wow. Very sad,very powerful. Hope you are feelign better. |
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Re: You Did This
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by MyLastBreath on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 09:53:41 PM AEST
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I really like this poem. I dig your writing style.
"Why can't our love again be real
This shouldn't have happened, why again me"
I can relate!
I hope things get better! :)
Peace |
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Re: You Did This
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by emphaticplacebo on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 09:35:10 AM AEST
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| Great write! very powerful and heartfelt. I can clearly see your emotions in this and the fire that burns inside. I can relate to this poem totally, so good job and I hope to read more from you :) |
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Re: You Did This
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by emphaticplacebo on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 09:39:40 AM AEST
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| Great write! very powerful and heartfelt. I can clearly see your emotions in this and the fire that burns inside. I can relate to this poem totally, so good job and I hope to read more from you :) |
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