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Once Complete
Contributed by
CuttersAngel
on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 09:37:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The tears I feel deep inside
The emotions from you I try to hide
The pain that grows as each day has past
Disbelief that our love didn't last
I gave all of me fully to you
I thought you felt this way too
I'll love you more with each passing day
As our memories continue fade
You don't want me, the stream will form
Reality too close to home
I hold this razor, I've lost my mind
This life was never truly mine
One slice, one vein, I feel free
This world was never right for me
It's spilling fast, the color dark
Now I've left my final mark
I can't move, I fall asleep
This was never mine to keep
The red is dim, the orange is bright
Death angels are surrounding my sight
Softly, smoothely, they chant to me
Reminding me of pain I chose not to see
It's dark outside, rainy and col
This depression is getting old
We made mistakes and broke the rules
In the end I was the fool
I love you, you lack the same
Another chapter, another game
Another tear, another piece
Of a broken heart that was once complete.
Copyright ©
CuttersAngel
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2004-04-11 21:37:32]
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Re: Once Complete
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by MyLastBreath on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 09:44:46 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed reading this. Great writing style.
Stay Strong! |
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Re: Once Complete
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 03:05:00 PM AEST
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so sad Cilla I wish u didn't feel like this despite that it spawns great poetry. Nice to see another poem by you and hopefully we can chat soon.
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Re: Once Complete
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by swiftsouljah on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 06:11:54 PM AEST
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good poem... giving yourself away is risky business im in the market of buying a heart...
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