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Better Things
Contributed by
faithmairee
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Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 07:37:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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it would take a picture
to make the pieces of your
face fall into place
ah, but i know your body
i've outlined it in
my mind a million times
sometimes, at night
i hold my pillow next
to me and pretend we
never drifted apart
in search of better things
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faithmairee
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2004-04-11 19:37:55]
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Re: Better Things
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by elizabethfusco on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 07:46:03 PM AEST
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| I love this poem. Very well written and I can relate to it so much..good job. |
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Re: Better Things
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by morelikelyrics on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 09:24:07 PM AEST
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just lovely and so warming... even though it clearly tells the story of saddening heartbreak...
just wonderfully written, it's pleasure to have read it (more than once)
...and all the girls in every girly magazine can't make me feel any less alone...
~Morelikelyrics |
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Re: Better Things
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by JRLatin77 on
Monday, 27th September 2010 @ 04:10:45 AM AEST
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| I must say I love the thought captured in your poem. Simple but deep. |
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