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Alone with myself
Contributed by
Dragontear27
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Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 05:09:17 PM in AEST
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Alone with myself till the end of the day
time goes slower and life passes away
no one knows about the tears i shed
everynight before i go to bed
i wish i could tell someone how lonely i feel
but i think about it and realize its not big deal
i guess i'm used to it sitting in the dark alone with myself
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Re: Alone with myself
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 05:15:21 PM AEST
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Such loneliness and despair.....
Well done
Larry |
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Re: Alone with myself
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by n2dep2care on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 05:28:12 PM AEST
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| You tell the tale extremely well-Bravo! |
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Re: Alone with myself
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by sheri on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 05:37:14 PM AEST
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| You have done a nice job describing loneliness |
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Re: Alone with myself
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by liquidsunshine on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 05:50:30 PM AEST
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I've been there. If I can actually read your poem and relate to it that way, I must say that that poem is simply effective. You're able to bring up thoughts and emotions in others with your work. Bravo and encore.
Chels |
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Re: Alone with myself
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by blueheart on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 07:11:34 AM AEST
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| You've worded your lonliness only too well. |
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Re: Alone with myself
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by Jupiter on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 09:02:28 AM AEST
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| So much sadness. I felt the same way myself in the past till i expressed my feelings. It just took time for people to understand. -Steve- |
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Re: Alone with myself
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by kidpoet_213 on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 01:14:54 AM AEST
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You know what... I can actully relate to this... being the youngest in my family... I was alone alot... and sometime still am...
Well written... u expressed the concept of loneliness very well... It hurts... I know all too well!!!
~Donna~ |
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