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Lost...
Contributed by
kidpoet_213
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Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 04:47:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Lost...
So lost... am I...feeling blue
Just livin' in my rose- colored world without you...
I'm not sure what I'm so lost about or who...
I just know that I am...
And maybe it's you...?
It's something I've lost... so recently...
And I'm feeling so lost too.... and in need of something from you
What I have lost... is something that can't be replaced so easily...
I've lost my heart... to you...
Lost...
So lost... am I...feeling blue
Just livin' in my rose- colored world without you...
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Re: Lost...
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 05:06:11 PM AEST
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awwww that was sad , sweet and so honest.
Very well done
Roses
Larry |
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Re: Lost...
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 05:19:39 PM AEST
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Oh yes.....I can certainly identify right now....I feel so lost myself...
Jenni |
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Re: Lost...
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by Cynthia on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 05:19:47 PM AEST
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| Awww, what a sad write. You painted a really big picture with this write. Alot of emotion put to this. I liked it. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Lost...
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by liquidsunshine on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 05:57:38 PM AEST
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As I read this poem, my heart sank and my brow furrowed and I commenced feeling just as you had described. Extremely picturesque.
Bravo and encore!!!
Love,
Chels |
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Re: Lost...
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by vampyrekiss on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 10:26:26 PM AEST
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| i truly like this and you express yourself so well keep it up :) |
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Re: Lost...
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by Rylo on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 10:59:57 PM AEST
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| This was a really great read. I really enjoyed this , you did a wonderful job. Keep them rolling. |
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Re: Lost...
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 06:57:17 AM AEST
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Very sweet and caring.
Thank you for sharing this with us it was a very good poem.
Kie |
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Re: Lost...
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by JennyFruFru on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 08:01:58 PM AEST
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| i have my own pair of rose colored glasses... i put them on when iwant to pretend that the world is perfect and not ful of sadness... im glad someone else has a pair too... but its ashame that we have to hide all our sadness... such a touching write :) |
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