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your mind
Contributed by
viola
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Thursday, 26th September 2002 @ 06:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You never seek the one you'll love,
they stumble into your life,
like a hurricane - they scatter
your mind.
Invading your thoughts every hour
of the minutes flying by,
like a jigsaw jumbled
your mind.
Someone, save me, I'm falling
more in love all the time,
like a lily sinking into
your mind.
Copyright ©
viola
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2002-09-26 06:30:00]
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Re: your mind
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by Three on
Thursday, 26th September 2002 @ 06:34:20 AM AEST
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It is very true, I like your poem. When I knew love, I could relate. I hope to see more.
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Re: your mind
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 26th September 2002 @ 07:36:57 AM AEST
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Loved this.... the comparison to the hurricane is so true...
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Re: your mind
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by Lia on
Friday, 27th September 2002 @ 12:31:41 AM AEST
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| Doesn't seem to me like you need help...if it's love..allow your self fall...and fall fast !!! |
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