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Consumed By Heartbreak
Contributed by
Queen_Dolly
on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 03:22:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I wish writing away my love for you
Was as easy as falling for you
I'm like a dead star
Falling faster to rock bottom;
My heart aflame
As I fall through emotions
Of numbness and pain
Now I know what people mean
When they say love hurts
It's like the most unbearable pain
Running straight through
The most delicate part of me;
My heart
Sharpest needles
Injecting an everyday process
Into my veins
Blood running cold
As heartbreak consumes me.
Copyright ©
Queen_Dolly
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2004-04-11 15:22:22]
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Re: Consumed By Heartbreak
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by reilt on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 03:39:08 PM AEST
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| wonderful poem...so full of emotion...i hope your heart heals |
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Re: Consumed By Heartbreak
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by Rhei76 on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 03:40:38 PM AEST
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The pain, the pain of a hundred deaths. That takes you away from their counter parts. Then you start to indigest, feeling only the wrath disquies of monsters hiding in the dark.
You've got to stop!
You've got to say it's all apart of me
my mind is what controls me.
Then believe
cause you are strong and you will survive.
heartbreak is good to learn from but sucks to know. |
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Re: Consumed By Heartbreak
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 03:53:25 PM AEST
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Sigh.... this was so well written.... I know the feeling only too well.....
Welcome to YPDC..
Jenni |
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Re: Consumed By Heartbreak
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by S_K_Williamson on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 04:03:57 PM AEST
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Very well written...I could feel your pain. I hope the pain goes away soon.
Great write,
Sharon;) |
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Re: Consumed By Heartbreak
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 12:17:01 AM AEST
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| this is very moving:) hugs n' love nessa |
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