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Sizzling Ashes
Contributed by
kayald
on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 02:55:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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In this rain
I see your eyes
echo the darkness
of the cloudless sky--
I long to just
touch your hand
and hold your
lips
for only a moment
and then
release
in unending
dissatisfaction...
I want to leave
having tasted some
and still wanting
so
much
more...
But, no
I return
wanting all I can never have.
Copyright ©
kayald
... [
2004-04-11 14:55:06]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: Sizzling Ashes
(User Rating: 1 )
by reilt on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 02:57:56 PM AEST
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| i think we've all been there .i hope you'll be ok...this is a lovely poem...i really liked it... |
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Re: Sizzling Ashes
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by Queen_Dolly on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 03:09:45 PM AEST
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Flows beautifully =) love it
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