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My dreams unfold
Contributed by
reilt
on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 02:07:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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My dreams unfold
inside your mouth,
With the essence of
your pressed lips,
My tongue wrapped round
these rising hopes
That your dreams will
merge with mine
And consummate.
Copyright ©
reilt
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2004-04-11 14:07:55]
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Re: My dreams unfold
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by kidpoet_213 on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 02:14:01 PM AEST
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This reminds me of one I wrote called the 1st ... last kiss... nice write... i especially like the last line... That your dreams will
merge with mine
And consummate.
Nice use of words there... keep writing...
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Re: My dreams unfold
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by Queen_Dolly on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 02:54:07 PM AEST
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| That's lovely - great use of vocabulary =) |
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Re: My dreams unfold
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by Coaster on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 04:04:42 PM AEST
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I wrote one like this a while ago for my girlfriend. I like the first two lines and the last two lines the most.
Ryan |
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Re: My dreams unfold
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 04:28:29 PM AEST
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Oh Oh....I'm seeing something totally different here.... sorry... Good write, tho.... :>)
Jenni |
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