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In the Show
Contributed by
broken-glass
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Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 02:06:47 PM in AEST
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oops
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Give me 'me' back,
I belong to me,
with you in my life,
it will always feel like 'three',
I'm a loner at heart,
need to be alone.
I've always been my company,
you've never been in the 'show'.
It's been three dark cold days,
still waiting for your call,
I'm beginning to wonder,
if you love me at all,
I'm frozen in time, and internal rhyme,
internal bleeding I'm filth I'm like slime.
I hate all these people,
clouding my town,
this house is so crowded,
this smiles is so frowned,
the phone isn't ringing,
I'm close to the edge,
my life is a building,
I'm sitting on the ledge.
Summer is coming,
but it still feels so cold.
You would have called if I were Brandon,
now I'm writhered and old.
I always wanted to be talented,
an exception to the rule,
but I forgot that I am special,
and just as good as you.
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2004-04-11 14:06:47]
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Re: In the Show
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by Queen_Dolly on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 02:51:34 PM AEST
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I like it.. my favourite part:
"I'm frozen in time, and internal rhyme,
internal bleeding I'm filth I'm like slime." |
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Re: In the Show
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by dolly_dagger on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 05:32:34 PM AEST
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nice and contemptuous. like it.
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Re: In the Show
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 03:31:15 PM AEST
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ive just read your other poems and i think your a really great poet.I love the part where u say : Summer is coming,
but it still feels so cold.
You would have called if I were Brandon,
now I'm writhered and old.
I love the way your comparing yourself to some1 and sounding angry and jealous.Im sure your better then that person n e way!! kerry xx |
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