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Eyes Like Rusty Saws
Contributed by
bleeding_chains
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Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 02:02:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Watching raindrops through tainted glass
Like looking into a mirror
A grey scaled picture
With see through tears
That look into the soul
To fight out hurt and pain
Leaving eyes like rusty saws
Stinging life all red and sore
Wash over with salt
But will it ever help
The pain
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2004-04-11 14:02:08]
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Re: Eyes Like Rusty Saws
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by Queen_Dolly on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 03:15:06 PM AEST
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Lovely descriptive writing.
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Re: Eyes Like Rusty Saws
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by MandiMay on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 11:42:48 PM AEST
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Very beautiful but sad I totally understand.
I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!! I gave it a 5! but it deseves more. |
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