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Solitude Is Beautiful
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afraid_of_fear
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Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 01:20:34 PM in AEST
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Solitude is beautiful
And loneliness; the crystal tear
And isolation breathes happiness
Through this blissful freedom
(But I have never felt so alone)
They all shall flee you, but it's okay
Your despair is all too much for them
They said they’d be there; they love you (-they lie)
And thus you're alone again
Oh and solitude is beautiful
And don't despair that no one cares
For isolation breathes a sense of something
To hold onto with your empty heart
(And I have never felt so alone)
Take within you their lies
For we have little else
Pretend you love them, as they said they did you
Make-believe what they say is true
For solitude is beautiful
You don't need anyone but yourself
Don't trust in anyone, not a soul
Keep your secrets within your heart
Oh solitude is so beautiful
And loneliness; the crystal tear
Love can only break your heart
And I should have known
(I have never felt so alone)
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Re: Solitude Is Beautiful
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 01:34:51 PM AEST
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oh charlotte! this is beautiful and captures everything so poetically elegant, i simply love this, its my new favorite of yours, your talent shines here:) hugs n' love nessa
*roses* |
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Re: Solitude Is Beautiful
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by saha on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 01:37:04 PM AEST
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| you've right solitude IS beautiful :] thanks for posted my poem. bye Sandra |
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Re: Solitude Is Beautiful
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by Jackee_line on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 02:03:10 PM AEST
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I totally relate to this poem. Solitude is beautiful and peaceful.
Well done |
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Re: Solitude Is Beautiful
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by Zee on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 02:33:15 PM AEST
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| You write very well. Nice write. |
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Re: Solitude Is Beautiful
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by reilt on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 02:54:00 PM AEST
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| your poetry is beautiful...well done...you are so talented |
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Re: Solitude Is Beautiful
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by MoonlitAngel on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 04:34:27 PM AEST
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This poem is beautiful! Sad but lovely. I'm feelin' it. Very well written!
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Solitude Is Beautiful
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by Justalady on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 05:05:34 PM AEST
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| And loneliness; the crystal tear. Beautiful and sad.. so sad. But, as one who has felt it ....I knew the line well. Deep, dark and sad. Justalady |
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Re: Solitude Is Beautiful
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 05:22:34 PM AEST
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Being alone is pretty, pretty pretty beautiful.
I liek this
yesss |
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Re: Solitude Is Beautiful
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by ShadowDaughter on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 05:23:14 PM AEST
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Wow, this is really, really, really, well done. You say it so beautifully . . . I especially liked the use of parentheses, it really made-- ack, I can't describe it. But it somehow brought significance, leave it at that. Nice work.
--Nora |
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Re: Solitude Is Beautiful
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by arden on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 08:59:13 PM AEST
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ohh girl this is just absolutely beautiful. just amazing. i loved every word.
just perfect. well done my friend.
Becky |
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Re: Solitude Is Beautiful
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by MandiMay on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 11:34:26 PM AEST
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| I liked it a lot I gave it a 4 |
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Re: Solitude Is Beautiful
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by blueheart on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 07:09:04 AM AEST
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| Oh my gosh, Charlotte, this is amazing! What a brilliant write. I could relate to every word and you place d it so well. I feel like this all the time. Honestly, this is one of your best writes. :) |
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Re: Solitude Is Beautiful
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 02:34:14 PM AEST
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this was amazing I don't know what to say except I feel alone to... this is one of your best.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Solitude Is Beautiful
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 05:49:03 PM AEST
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I can really identify with this, excellent.
wildej. |
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Re: Solitude Is Beautiful
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by alecfernadez on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 01:12:26 PM AEST
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| so much power and beauty expressed, the repetition of '(I have never felt so alone) just increased the power of the emotions... Just WoW! |
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Re: Solitude Is Beautiful
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by SAT on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 02:24:49 PM AEST
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Deep, and yet, softly put... loved it! Keep it up!
Alicia Marie
~*SAT*~ |
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Re: Solitude Is Beautiful
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by JennyFruFru on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 08:35:31 PM AEST
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| if you only knew how true i found this poem at this particular point in time ....... it sucks...... and love my friend can only break your heart.......... what a poem of such great truth and wisdom......... |
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Re: Solitude Is Beautiful
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by reprobate on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 10:01:02 PM AEST
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Your own lovliness is reflected within the beauty of this work. So tender and bitingly sweet. Exceptional. I absolutely love it.
Many thanks for this insight.
Mike C. |
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Re: Solitude Is Beautiful
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by blackmarker on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 02:30:09 PM AEST
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| Thats beautiful.. I love it. Wonderful. Marvellous. Splendid. Excellent.. I could keep going. But I won't. I'll just say.. Wow. I love it.. Great job. Keep on writing, please! |
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Re: Solitude Is Beautiful
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 01:20:36 PM AEST
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Wow! The window into your heart is always opened, and such beauty comes shining through! Sorry I'm the last to comment! {outta touch for awhile} but I am catching up! :-)
Awesome writing girlfriend! Simply awesome!!! Keep on expressing...you won't feel so alone!
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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Re: Solitude Is Beautiful
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by Silent-No-More on
Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 02:16:13 PM AEST
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| This is wonderfully melancholy AND inspirational at the same time. Nicely done! |
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Re: Solitude Is Beautiful
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by Black13 on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 12:48:23 AM AEST
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Wow...
I don't think I really know what to say.
I'm just going to leave it as this is beautiful and so true to me. |
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Re: Solitude Is Beautiful
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by Cancer on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 11:43:59 PM AEST
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i was going to cut and paste the first three stanzas and rant about them, until i read the rest. then i realized i'd just have to copy the whole ***** scrawl. if this isn't my favorite scrawl on the site, it's got to be in the top three and i really can't remember another one right now that i enjoyed as much. i'm at a loss for something creative or original to say in praise of this so i'll just say, damn, excellent scrawl.
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Re: Solitude Is Beautiful
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by ShadowDaughter on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 02:06:13 PM AEST
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Charlotte . . . damn . . .
Reading this one again. I can't think how many people I've reccommended this to; how many times I've re-read this poem. It's one of my top YPDC favorites and each time it means a little bit more. At the moment it means too much for me to form a coherent, pleasant comment, so I'll hush :).
--Nora |
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Re: Solitude Is Beautiful
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by ShadowDaughter on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 02:07:44 PM AEST
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| I just realized that the comment I just posted here was my 500th. I was waiting for a really spectacular one to make my 500th comment on. At the moment, I can't think of a better one for it than this :). |
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