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simplify
Contributed by
artwitness
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Wednesday, 25th September 2002 @ 08:30:00 PM in AEST
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An artist must tell their truth,
which saddens me,
because that's her truth,
which matters to me as much
as mine,
or more.
She's out there.
Reading to crowds,
at festivals,
getting published,
telling half truths.
that in her eyes
I was this charicature
of maleness.
Copyright ©
artwitness
... [
2002-09-25 20:30:00]
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Re: simplify
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Wednesday, 25th September 2002 @ 10:59:28 PM AEST
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| nice write, thanks for sharing |
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Re: simplify
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by artwitness on
Thursday, 26th September 2002 @ 12:55:19 AM AEST
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| Thank you. It needs tightening but I consider it a work in progress. |
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Re: simplify
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by aernby on
Thursday, 26th September 2002 @ 03:34:52 AM AEST
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the poem is well done with just a twist of irony: the narrator's truth may be only a half truth to the poet being written about ...nice touch
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Re: simplify
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 26th September 2002 @ 07:45:29 AM AEST
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Awesome write!!!
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