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unconcievable love
Contributed by
spider
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Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 11:15:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You said you love me
But how can you?
How can you love something
That has no love?
How can u care for someone
Who cares for nothing?
How can u hold warm feelings
For someone who's heart is numb?
How can u cry for someone
In an emotional coma?
How can you love me
When I'm dead to the world?
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2004-04-11 11:15:21]
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Re: unconcievable love
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by Insomnia_InfiniteSadness on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 11:44:12 AM AEST
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| A nerve racking poem, for someone too scared to ask for fear of rejection, you have approached the situation from the reverse angle, thankyou for your point of view. |
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Re: unconcievable love
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by reilt on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 03:47:22 PM AEST
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| i really loved this poem especially the last two lines... a really great write...and thank you |
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Re: unconcievable love
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by MoonlitAngel on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 04:29:13 PM AEST
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Ooh I like this... reminds me of someone. Great write!
~ Moonlit |
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Re: unconcievable love
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by JennyFruFru on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 08:23:50 PM AEST
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| emotional coma thats how i feel about everything in my life.... nice write :) |
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Re: unconcievable love
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by Sparkz16 on
Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 02:37:00 PM AEST
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| wow....wish i could have wrote that to my ex when i was trying to break up with him the first time but he finally got the idea after the third time tho lol really nice write i love it |
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