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slow whispers of the forgotten
Contributed by
stitches
on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 10:34:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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whispers
fragments
forming
then fading
just as fast
as you read this
leaving my
fingertips
entering your reality
disturbing
changing
can you?
An epitaph
is written
chiseled
as my mind
sickens
frailer
than frailty
my tears smear
in the dust
of memories
betraying
the truth
I can't
a new picture
a new nightmare
what could you?
why did you?
and there is no end
to the questions
the questions
are not complete
scrambling
trying to find meaning
as even now i'm decaying
there is no pain
i need the pain
to feel
anything
how did?
with me?
about they?
spinning
reeling in terror
i step away
from myself
and watch
i am the watcher
can you see?
the enigma
is the answer
where are my eyes?
why my?
all i wanted to say...
all i wanted
all of it
gone
and now in you
Copyright ©
stitches
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2004-04-11 10:34:26]
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Re: slow whispers of the forgotten
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 10:43:23 AM AEST
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Very well done...great emotions
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Re: slow whispers of the forgotten
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by bernard on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 10:50:30 AM AEST
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| Good poem shows a deeper side that is trying to get out. Keep em coming from bernard |
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Re: slow whispers of the forgotten
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by Kie on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 07:10:20 PM AEST
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Subliminal messages passed to the reader?
Very interesting perspective found in this poem.
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