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Death
Contributed by
silent
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Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 08:11:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I see a man, lying on the path
Death approaches, people stop to stare
Why don't you help I cry, suppression in the air
This man is lucky to me
As now he can understand, what we all cannot see
Copyright ©
silent
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2004-04-11 08:11:29]
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Re: Death
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by Avarice_Riot on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 08:31:17 AM AEST
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| So much power and meaning packed into only a few lines...I've told you before and I'll tell you again, you are an amazing writer to be able to show such skill and depth with words. |
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Re: Death
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 09:22:40 AM AEST
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straight to the point enough said. Fantastic.
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Re: Death
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 09:52:01 PM AEST
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Bittersweet and beautiful. This is amazing. Thanks Silent.
Lindsey
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Re: Death
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 09:57:14 PM AEST
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| i was in ny one time and it happened a man died on the sidewalk right in front of me and the crowds of people just stepped over him like it was so common place, this poem really moved me, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Death
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by AnGeL_M on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 06:55:42 AM AEST
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This Is An Awesome Write :-) Loved It Keep Em Coming.........Your A Terrific Writer Silent...
Short And Bittersweet Just The Way I Like It.....
********LoVe**AnGeL*********
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Re: Death
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by venkat on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 07:55:11 AM AEST
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| You are straight to the point...venkat |
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Re: Death
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by afraid_of_fear on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 05:28:26 PM AEST
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this is incredible.. short but there's so much to it..
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: Death
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by Kie on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 07:12:36 PM AEST
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People are so busy and insensitive they just ignore callously. Very moving poem that makes a person think and I question if I would ever be like that or better yet am I really like that?
You got me to thinking deeply...
Kie |
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Re: Death
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by JennyFruFru on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 12:45:55 AM AEST
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| i agree with avarice... its amazing what you do with such few words... and its such a shame that today many people will not stop to help one who is in need of help :) |
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Re: Death
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by arden on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 09:18:10 AM AEST
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short yes but utterly amazing.
so powerful. i loved this. well done.
5 stars
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Re: Death
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by afraid_of_fear on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 06:20:20 PM AEST
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This is a sad and moving, but also very wise poem. I like it a lot. Keep up the good work :)
charlotte x_x_x |
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