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Screams from within
Contributed by
silent
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Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 07:56:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
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As I gaze upon a lovely woman
I see a disturbance of her mind, the screams that haunt
That petrify, how to overcome this is not known
TO do so would permit release, unknown and unwanted.
Copyright ©
silent
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2004-04-11 07:56:45]
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Re: Screams from within
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by Spike on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 08:00:34 AM AEST
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| Obtuse, esoteric, but strangley compelling. |
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Re: Screams from within
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by Avarice_Riot on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 08:34:43 AM AEST
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| Didn't come across as offensive at all, instead it paints vague but imaginable imagery. I understand this more that you know. Thanks for sharing this with us. |
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Re: Screams from within
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 10:48:42 AM AEST
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The devils that lurk within....
well done
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Re: Screams from within
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 09:41:06 PM AEST
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Hey Silent, another wonderful write. Gave me chills. Thats a good thing ;)
Lindsey |
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Re: Screams from within
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by JennyFruFru on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 12:48:23 AM AEST
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| i wasnt offended :) a very intriguing write :) |
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