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Conclusion to ''Sweet Dreams''
Contributed by
TheNewWayOfHurt
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Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 02:47:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The old movie and song brings back our "remember whens"
But that night my knife stained crimsen is what should have been..
No, the stars would of shined for you that night
She always did have alot of pretty boys she called friends
So "take a deep breath" before I do somthing we'll both regret
(you sl**)
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Re: Conclusion to ''Sweet Dreams''
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by mountainhigh on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 02:51:01 AM AEST
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| betrayal is a cup of bitterness hard to swallow, but what goes around comes around. know those feelings so well.......and the emotions that go with them. Thanks for the write, very good. |
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Re: Conclusion to ''Sweet Dreams''
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by prajwal on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 08:29:27 AM AEST
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A FINE COMPILATION.
BUT SEEMS A BIT INCOMPLETE.
COULD HAVE BEEN MADE MORE READABLE |
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