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the one
Contributed by
Luxx
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Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 01:54:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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the one....
the one i can't have.
the one i want.
the one...
the one who knows.
the one who feels.
the one....
i'll never know,
i'll never understand
why you're the one
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Luxx
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2004-04-11 01:54:20] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: the one
(User Rating: 1 ) by Bunni on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 08:37:10 PM AEST (User
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I like it. It's simple, yet it expresses a raw feeling that complicated words probably couldn't do justice to.
I think it's wonderful. |
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