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I Wonder....
Contributed by
hot-shot
on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 01:32:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I wonder lonely across the field
trying to understand the way I feel
Yet, I cannot describe it in words.
The flowers are smiling
Dancing and ceaselessly hugging!
Wishing I could do the same.
How could you have broken my heart?
I thought it was love right from the start!
But I was wrong.
My trust has been spurned
Good lessons I have learned!
What is left there to say?
The birds are singing
Telling me to leave the past behind.
The blue sky gives me hope to stand
I know that I’ll see you again
Whatever happens and come what may,
I wont do the same mistake That had caused me heart ache.
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2004-04-11 01:32:51]
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Re: I Wonder....
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by Luxx on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 01:57:52 AM AEST
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| wow..thats really good...i like it...loads.. |
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Re: I Wonder....
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 02:07:25 AM AEST
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I can feel the emotion completely.
But dont give up! Keep hoping for the fairy-tale stuff, because it's more real than "real life". See if it isn't in the end!
Take care.
Andrew |
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