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If
Contributed by
kittygurl
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Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 10:42:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
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If a person doesn't have feelings
Can it feel?
If the world was bigger
Would it have more space?
If people stopped complaining
Wouldn't they be happier?
If people laughed more
Wouldn't they be happier?
If nothing mattered
Who would care?
If emptiness was filled
Would it be full?
If a heart was broken
Shouldn't it be mended?
If you read this poem
Shouldn't you leave a comment to it?
Copyright ©
kittygurl
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2004-04-10 22:42:49]
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Re: If
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by jmt25607 on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 10:56:57 PM AEST
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| lol that was sweet and funny i like the last part well i guess thats all i got to say bye chill out --jessika |
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Re: If
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by AnGeL_M on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 11:29:11 PM AEST
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LoL I Like This :-) This Was Funny t A Very Good Write....I Enjoyed It.....
********LoVe***AnGeL********
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Re: If
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by garyh on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 12:10:47 AM AEST
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| Pretty good even though I don't totally agree with it :P |
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Re: If
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by Coaster on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 01:08:48 AM AEST
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haha liked the ending a lot. Keep posting them up and I look foward to read more of your writes!
Ryan |
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Re: If
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by little_genna on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 06:49:40 AM AEST
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well done this is amusing. i like the ending of this.
love and hugs
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