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Morning
Contributed by
sheri
on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 09:31:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Golden dawn seeps into the room
crawling over tiny toes
settling into the cervices beneath the window
warm rays of sun drown
the remainder of night and sweeping away
the cotton fluff that dreams are made of
angels pause in the brief second before the
world is tumultously awake
to say a pray for the day's sake
birds sing melodic interludes
yesterday's demon is long past dead,
without even blinking an eye
I blunder my way to the warmth that awaits me
like a long over due welcome home.
Copyright ©
sheri
... [
2004-04-10 21:31:33] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Morning
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jellybellyprincess on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 09:34:31 PM AEST (User
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Gorgeous gorgeous GORGEOUS!
This is such an amazingly beautiful write I have nothing else to say other than I enjoyed reading this like you wouldn't believe.
Truly an amazing write. |
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Re: Morning
(User Rating: 1 ) by alasdaircairns on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 10:06:43 PM AEST (User
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Such vivid and dreamlike words are a joy to read. My fave poem today!!! |
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Re: Morning
(User Rating: 1 ) by buchi on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 12:42:25 PM AEST (User
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Beautiful.....the cotton fluff that dreams are made of...
I love your poem...
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Re: Morning
(User Rating: 1 ) by MaMort on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 07:30:52 PM AEST (User
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wow you did that perfectly! The wording is brilliant! |
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