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Time is right

Contributed by sunraybutterfly on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 08:04:03 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

Hello can you hear me?
Are you ready?
For this revelation?

Cause this woman is gonna shine today, do you hear boo
There’s no stopping her this time. She’s gonna let it all come out
Sing it with life – She’s gonna dance with passion
She’s gonna find her fancy man and kiss him under the moon

Hello can you hear what she is saying
Cause the time has come to start
A revolution in this being

She is walking through a whole new world now, a road that is well walked before.
She quivers with the energy that possesses.
It charges her soul – it turns every part of her body on
– Makes her shake with the anticipation – sizzle with desire

Hello can you hear me boy
Cause the time has come to start
A revolution in this being
She’s gonna to rise to the sky

Each sensation is intense like ice on a heated body
– Her body responds to every thought - Every sight, that she sees walking down this road, such an unforgiving hold over her – she is at the mercy of these sensations. It takes over her - Tongues over lips – soft embraces of mouth – this invisible man that tastes her – bares her

Hello can you hear me boy
Cause the time is has come to start
A revolution in this being
She’s gonna to rise to the sky

Copyright Â© sunraybutterfly ... [ 2004-04-10 20:04:03]
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Re: Time is right (User Rating: 1 )
by Jellybellyprincess on Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 09:22:25 PM AEST
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Good job!
I like how you stick in the "Hello can you hear me" lines. They have a nice seperation from the other lines. You know, those are the more normal happenings of the poem. Then the real passion comes out of the longer, more elaborate lines.
Nicely done!

God bless,
Ellen

(and yes, the lyrics are working well, so keep at it!) ; )

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