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Dancing in the Rain
Contributed by
JustScream715
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Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 07:54:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Does anything feel right?
Always in living in your sheltered world?
Not free to be who you are.
Can you ever break free?
I know how it feels to be locked up tight.
Needing more then what your given.
Going slowly insane from being boxed up.
I know the pain of
Never being able to dance in the rain.
The feeling is just to real. Why don’t you
Have the freedom will you so earn for.
Every thing feels so wrong.
Ribbons in your hair, you should be on air.
All the things that satisfy most.
Intoxicate your brain. It’s
Not what you need. You need to dance in the rain.
Copyright ©
JustScream715
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2004-04-10 19:54:51]
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Re: Dancing in the Rain
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by afraid_of_fear on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 08:01:46 PM AEST
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wow.. im speechless.. this could have been written about me.. beautiful.. i love it, i love it..
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: Dancing in the Rain
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by waos on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 08:10:58 PM AEST
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Re: Dancing in the Rain
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by morelikelyrics on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 09:42:14 PM AEST
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"You need to dance in the rain"
-I love doing that, dancing in the rain...
-Just like I loved this poem...
Nice work!!
Shadows may follow in your footsteps, but only you decide to where it heads...
~Morelikelyrics |
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