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She left
Contributed by
Chicken
on
Wednesday, 25th September 2002 @ 04:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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She said she wanted just a little time
But even as she said it I knew she was gone.
I tried a little too hard to keep her
And I blinded myself to the reality of love.
Maybe she'll come back to me
Or maybe I won't ever love again .
Attachment seems to be my problem.
I was-am-will always be attached to her.
She wasn't my first love,
But I was hers,
And I guess my definition of Love was wrong.
Copyright ©
Chicken
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2002-09-25 16:30:00]
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Re: She left
(User Rating: 1 )
by WordPoet on
Thursday, 26th September 2002 @ 05:27:35 AM AEST
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| I liked the sincerity and openess of this poem. The emotions were plain and easy to understand. |
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Re: She left
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 26th September 2002 @ 07:53:35 AM AEST
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Ahh Chicken....try squeezing a fistful of sand.. trying to hold on tightly to all the grains.... then try just holding the same amount of sand in your other fist..not trying to really keep a hold on it... see what happens.. Better luck next time....
Jenni |
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Re: She left
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by ginsdance on
Sunday, 6th October 2002 @ 01:14:18 PM AEST
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It'll be ok!!! Remember, I've got two ears to lend if you need them bud! Keep up the good writing Drew2, and thanks for the history notes!!!
Ginny |
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