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IF ONLY IN A DREAM
Contributed by
PRECIOUSBECKY
on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 04:40:14 PM in AEST
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Are you asleep?
Why do you creep
into my dreams...................
Where all things seem possible
and have a way of playing themselves out.
The only place you kiss me on my mouth.....
AND LOVE ME
The only place we will ever be together- the only place that IT never dies-
That our love survives- several minutes after sex.
The only place I'm allowed to lay my head upon your chest-
Sweet surrender- Eternal bliss.
Do you invade intentionally- just to torture me
Or are my dreams the only place you can give yourself completely.
YOU are simply not real
But how could I feel-
so intensely for a DREAM....
For such a wonderful DREAM.
Copyright ©
PRECIOUSBECKY
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2004-04-10 16:40:14]
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Re: IF ONLY IN A DREAM
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by persia on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 04:48:32 PM AEST
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Wow!
Powerful stuff!
GR8 write!
Persia |
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Re: IF ONLY IN A DREAM
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by Fionndruinne on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 05:44:56 PM AEST
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Beautiful emotion. I know exactly how it feels.
Excellent piece. Keep it up!
Anar caluva tielyanna.
(the sun will shine upon your path)
Andrew |
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Re: IF ONLY IN A DREAM
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 05:58:24 PM AEST
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Ahhh Dreams..... what would be do without them......Lovely write..
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Re: IF ONLY IN A DREAM
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by AspenGlow on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 02:19:28 PM AEST
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Sweet dreams are the language of the trapped soul when the body can not be.
Long live the dream, and let the dream be free.
Thank you for sharing. |
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Re: IF ONLY IN A DREAM
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by priss on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 10:29:07 PM AEST
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| beautiful poem, becky. it sucks when you wake up and realize it wasn't real. |
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