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LAST RELEASE
Contributed by
little_genna
on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 04:02:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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I’m a young adult, where’s your trust?
You think I’m full of lust.
We’re just friends can’t you see?
Just let us be.
He is harmless,
You just think he is full of badness.
He treats me like his kid sister,
But you think he’s got a boner.
Or some strange loner.
You really do take my will to live.
You keep me captive.
I’m no longer a naïve fool.
You treat me cruel.
Pushing me to breaking point.
May as well put me at gunpoint.
Losing my grip.
Over your hate for my friendship.
Kill me now or forever hold your peace.
Because this my last release.
Copyright ©
little_genna
... [
2004-04-10 16:02:08]
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Re: LAST RELEASE
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by Rhei76 on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 04:07:12 PM AEST
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nice write.
sounds like something
every one can take time
to put to a feeling they've
had to bear.
so, good deal
oh, parents will get over it. |
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Re: LAST RELEASE
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by persia on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 04:22:15 PM AEST
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I hear were u comin' from!
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Re: LAST RELEASE
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by Chade on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 11:09:15 AM AEST
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Parents hold girls on a tighter lease then boys (from what iv xperianced neway). Everything will b ok in the end.
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