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Mistrust
Contributed by
Mihiri
on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 01:35:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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My friend doesn’t trust me; I don’t know why,
She interrogates me till I want to break-down and cry,
She thinks I’m a liar, but I know that I’m not,
Why does she hurt me and the little pride that I’ve got?
She came to me once when she needed my aid,
I helped her, but she swung around and slapped me and said,
‘You two-faces hoodwinker! You lied to me so...’
But whatever I did wrong, I still don’t know
She now sits next to me while studying in class,
I feel as though all of her smiles are nothing but a farce,
I know not what to say ‘cause I know not what I’ve done,
I wish this would blow away, I wish we could start again at square one
Copyright ©
Mihiri
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2004-04-10 13:35:13]
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Re: Mistrust
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by Thivanka on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 02:08:51 PM AEST
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Well Mihiri, your life seems to circle around some pretty 'interesting' friends. I like your rhyme usage though, and I hope samantha will treat you in better ways rather than 'Slapping you on your face'.
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Re: Mistrust
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by Ravisada on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 08:20:35 AM AEST
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A nice poem
Sincere friendships never die
Ravi |
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