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Copy cat
Contributed by
broken-glass
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Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 12:00:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I have lost all those illusions.
Since I first wrote down my pain at the age of nine,
I'm sixteen now and feeling fine(?).
Like the stimulation of the place in the corner of my eye,
when I first got be-littled and I started to cry,
you may see me as a rash but I am not going away,
expressing my emotion, I was always here to say.
You are just a Parasite, consuming off anothers blood.
Your own ideas were never thought of, just served to you with friends so easily gained.
I don't care much for a copy cat, i don't care much for your pain.
You have that sparkle in your eye that makes me want to starve myself,
I feel dark around you in the lightest part of the day.
I need not erase you, I know you yourself will go away...
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broken-glass
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2004-04-10 12:00:26]
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Re: Copy cat
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by wyrd_faerie on
Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 12:19:18 PM AEST
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| wow...this poem is incredible... |
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Re: Copy cat
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 07:42:36 PM AEST
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What happened to your love poetry? Anyway this was great as well the comparisons were great. I loved it fed off the anger in this like the parasite you talk about.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Copy cat
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by dolly_dagger on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 08:21:09 PM AEST
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interesting. don't think i gained full understanding so excuse me while i re-read.
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Re: Copy cat
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by jade_elephant on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 04:00:50 PM AEST
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| this is great, nothing more to say! oh except some of it is confusing and i would love to know who your poetry is about. x |
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