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Soldier
Contributed by
Thivanka
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Saturday, 10th April 2004 @ 11:28:21 AM in AEST
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There he lay at legnth,
Face numb and body feeble,
Tries to gain his wandered stregnth,
But is thoroughly unable.
His sphere of memory far away,
His tears of pain, so close & warm,
He wonders where his family lay,
Cause without him, they are probably torn.
Around him, the world is dark,
Despite the spark in his eyes.
From a distance, he hears a stray dog bark,
As the spark within dies.
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Thivanka
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2004-04-10 11:28:21]
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Re: Soldier
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 03:04:45 AM AEST
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Deeply touching...I loved this...
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Re: Soldier
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 02:19:11 AM AEST
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you wrote the thoughts of a dying man with great insight well done.
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